I sat down at the computer, all ten fingers poised over the keyboard even though I normally use only three of them typing, waiting for the Windshield Operating System to open all 38,000 files and become operative, while the sweat on my arm blurred the opening line for the Great American Novel I had written in laundry marker there when it came to me while on the exercycle and I began to wonder how many people at the gym now hate me for not showering before I ran out the door.
Yes, it’s Bulwer-Lytton time again. For the 23rd time, Scott Rice and the Department of English and Comparative Literature (compared to what, you may ask) at San Jose State University have, in their less-than-infinite wisdom, picked a mildly amusing run-on sentence other than any of the several I submitted as the winner of the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest, the only literary contest that counts, especially since that airline magazine has stopped publishing the winner of the Faux Faulkner Contest.
As much as “Dan McKay, Fargo, ND”’s entry comparing “her ample bosom” to “the dual Stromberg carburetors in his vintage Triumph Spitfire… perched prominently on top of the intake manifold” is a humorous conceit, albeit one that is not all that original, there were several runner-up entries (all also NOT by me) that I enjoyed more.
“Captain Burton stood at the bow of his massive sailing ship, his weathered face resembling improperly cured leather that wouldn’t even be used to make a coat or something.”
“It was a dark and stormy night, although technically it wasn’t black or anything — more of a gravy color like the spine of the 1969 Scribner’s Sons edition of “A Farewell to Arms,” and, truth be told, the storm didn’t sound any more fierce than the opening to Leon Russell’s 1975 classic, ‘Back to the Island.’”ohmigod, I remember that record… from those ancient days when we called them ‘records’
“‘Why does every task in the Realm of Zithanor have to be a quest?’ Baldak of Erthorn, handyman to the Great Wizard Zarthon, asked rhetorically as he began his journey to find the Holy Hammer of Taloria and the Sacred Nail of Ikthillia so Baldak could hang one of Zarthon’s mediocre watercolors, which was an art critique Baldak kept to himself unlike his predecessor, whom Zarthon had turned into the Picture Frame of Torathank.”note: I omitted a grammatically extraneous ‘began’ from the middle of that entry, conscious that the B-L Contest does NOT give extra credit for typos
“Sphincter, the gladiator, girded his loins in preparation for today’s games, glad to be part of the season opener since he hadn’t been sure until yesterday that his contract would be renewed, given his slump during the Germans-versus-lions series but he knew that swatting Germans into the lion’s pit was trickier than it looked and he told the officials that they should look at his other stats, not just Huns batted in.”… or PUNS batted in.
“Wet leaves stuck to the spinning wagon wheels like feathers to a freshly tarred heretic, reminding those who watched them of the endless movement of the leafy earth-or so they would have, if only those fifteenth-century onlookers had believed that the earth actually rotated, which they didn’t, which is why it was heretical to say that it did-and which is the reason why the wagon held a freshly tarred heretic in the first place.”
“The night resembled nothing so much as the nose of a giant Labrador in excellent health: cold, black, and wet.” Best. Dark. And. Stormy. Night. Variation. Ever.
“Our fearless heroine (well, mostly fearless: she is deathly afraid of caterpillars, not the fuzzy little brown ones but the colossal green ones that terrorized her while she was playing in her grandmother’s garden when she was just five or six years old, which, coincidentally, was also when she discovered that shaving cream really does not taste like whipped cream) awakened with a start.” Parenthetical (you gotta love ‘em) digressions.
“The golden-haired dawn curled back the fading face of night in a perpetual coiffure like an Ace comb in God’s hand parting the day, making pompadours of mountains, crew cuts of Kansas wheat fields, and trendy cuts of the oceans’ rolling waves.”
“As soon as Sherriff Russell heard Bradshaw say, “This town ain’t big enough for the both of us,” he inadvertantly visualized a tiny chalk-line circle with a town sign that said ‘population 1,’ and the two of them both trying to stand inside of it rather ineffectively, leaning this way and that, trying to keep their balance without stepping outside of the line, and that was why he was smiling when Bradshaw shot him.”
“The assassin drew his dagger - a simple line drawing in black ink on rose-tinted vellum.”
I just hope I can get this out of my system before my next Professional Writing Assignment is due.
obligatory credits: Bryan Semrow, Oshkosh, WI; Kevin Hogg, Cranbrook, BC, Canada; SSG Kevin Craver, Fort Polk, LA; Robert Peltzer, Baltimore, MD; Alf Seegert, Salt Lake City, UT; Devery Doleman, Brooklyn, NY; Alison Heft, Lititz, PA; Gordon Grant, Savannah, GA; Keriann Noble, Murray, UT; Mike Bender, Portland, OR, more or less in that order.